Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login

    It has been a while since you have been back home. After spending almost the entire summer at camp, everything looks almost dreamlike from being gone for so long. You let out a long sigh as you enter your house. You certainly missed all your friends from camp; after all, your hometown friends are not as willing to listen to you and your troubles.

     “Hey, Sweetie, how was camp?” a familiar voice calls to you and captures you in a loving hug.

    “Hey Mom, I missed you. It was great—probably the best year ever, actually,” you say, grinning to her. Your stomach then speaks for you, telling your mom what you are thinking.

    “Well, I see that you haven’t changed at all since you left,” she laughs. “Go wash up; I made your favorite.”

     

    You stride into the kitchen and wash your hands. Looking up, you glance out at the wooded area by your house.

     

    “Wha- what … was that?” you murmur to yourself, as you see something slide behind a tree; it seemed as if it were trying to hide from you. Was someone watching you; and if so, why?

     

     “_____________? Are you alright?” you mother inquires, an alarmed tone lacing her typically calm voice.

    "How long had I been standing there", you think. Your mother hurries over to you, placing her hand on your forehead.

    “Oh my, you seem to have a fever, ____________. Do you want me to get you some soup and some ginger ale?” she says with a worried look in her eye.

    “Maybe that person I saw was a hallucination triggered by my fever,” you think, trying to give yourself the benefit of the doubt. “No, (favorite food) is fine—actually it’s perfect.” However, as soon as the words leave your mouth, you feel ready to vomit.

                                                                ~(*)~

    Later that night, you begin to dream as you lay in bed. You were hiking along an unfamiliar trail, admiring the evergreen foliage and flowers around you. The petite flowers were a deep, yet electrifying hue of purple. Suddenly, the sun began to fall below the trees; as if it could not wait to trap you in the darkness of the woods. Your head swiveled around in desperation searching for somebody, anybody. You had to get away, you had to move; now. Your legs start moving faster and faster—hell, you did not even realize you could run that quickly! Your breath came in short, ragged breathes as you begin to slow, exhausted at your pace. You notice a disturbance in the forest, a white note pasted onto a nearby tree.

    “A piece of paper?” you questioned aloud, However, your voice was weak, you subconsciously know you need to stay quiet. You notice black markings on the page, which your eyes soon register as letters despite the darkness; still, you cannot instantly make all of them out.

     

    “Rea…d…y…. ready…. or …… no…t... not… Ready or not?” you whisper. While you did not understand the words, your subconscious seems to know exactly what it means, as you suddenly begin sprinting again. As you run, you notice another piece of paper on a tree.  

    “Who the hell is leaving notes everywhere?” you thought. “And why am I so afraid?”

    You held up the note, trying to make out the letters, “d…o…. yo…u…not…w…ant…. to…play? Play? What’s going on?” you breathe. You take off once more. Minutes later, your foot catches on a root, tripping and you slamming you into the ground. A thud sounds through the darkness

     

    "Your cute when you’re afraid, you know that"  a thousand voices whisper in your head, laughing and mocking you. Your body begins to shake uncontrollably. You try to get up and run again, but the “root” wraps around your ankle. You fall once again, as the voices hiss, "now now, none of that, you don’t want to get hurt do you?" you hear the voices again. Your eyes fill with tears and you try to scream, but no sound comes out. Suddenly, you hear what sounds like static on the radio or television. You curl your head into your knees, griping it as if you were in a lot of pain—however, since you are dreaming, you cannot feel pain. A white figure steps out from behind a tree; a moment later, you wish more than anything that you hadn’t looked at its face, or rather the lack thereof. There was no facial features, only what looked like a cloth mask or something. There was no indentations of a nose, mouth, eyes, or ears where there should have been; there was only a white piece of cloth. He looks like one of those manikins that people use to make clothes on, or like a scarecrow wearing a black suit. As he saunters over to you, your breathing quickens. He reaches down and places his hand on your head, eliciting a scream from you.

     

    You bolt up out of bed, gasping for air. You put your head in between your knees to try to calm yourself down and began telling yourself over and over, “It was just a dream, just a dream, just a little night mare.” You then notice that the TV had turned to static while you slept. You stir from your bed just to retrieve some water; then return to bed.

i do not own creepypasta,
readerX slender
people who helped me edit: [link] and another friend who isn't cool enough to have a da

Chapter 2: [link]
Add a Comment:
 
:iconcreepypasta1catgirl:
creepypasta1catgirl Featured By Owner Edited 5 days ago  New Deviant Student Artist
Honestly i think some of these people text with out thinking i was just scrolling down until i saw like 9000 people write chain messages. It's very weird to see that people still write them even though you said not to ...... i don't understand.Face Palm Face Palm emote 
But i would like to say that this story is very interesting 
Reply
:iconrising-hope-chan:
Rising-Hope-chan Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
Dont read~ New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you((this is not mine, I didn't come up with this.. I was told to only pass this along when I saw this in a comments event...sorry ))
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Student Artist
I'm not mad, but can you please not post chain messages on my stuff, thank you.
Reply
:iconwolfgirl2902:
wolfgirl2902 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading or you'll die from sudden overexposure to chainfail! There was once a little boy named Jack Ass, he was 12-years-old and saw a comment online telling him to copy and paste it all over the internet, but he didn't do it and guess what happened to him and his entire family? NOTHING WHATSOEVER! Do you wanna' risk having that happen to you?! Hurry! In the next ten minutes, copy and paste this to twenty ignoramus noobs who honestly believe in this bullshit! If you do, then crime will stop and dragons will be real! If you don't, then someone will clone Hitler back to life, make him president, and he'll illegalize rainbows!
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Student Artist
I know this one is a joke one, but please don't post chain messages on my stuff, thank you
Reply
:iconwolfgirl2902:
wolfgirl2902 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Student Artist
I'm not mad, but can you please not post chain messages on my stuff, thank you.
Reply
:iconthereadysetfan1:
YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER AND SO DETAILED GREAT JOB!
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Student Artist
Thank you so much!
Reply
:iconthebluepanda5:
thebluepanda5 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you.
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Student Artist
Please don't post chain messages on my story
Reply
:iconthebluepanda5:
thebluepanda5 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015
sorry
Reply
:iconiiskiee:
iiSkiee Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
Holy shiat, you're an amazing writer. Love this so far <3
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Student Artist
Thank you
Reply
:iconheta-fics75:
Heta-fics75 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
Reply
:iconhannah12987:
hannah12987 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Student Artist
Please don't post chain mails on my stuff, thank you
Reply
:iconwritergirl4life:
WriterGirl4Life Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow nice its funny cause 1. I just came back from camp, two I live RIGHT next to a forest (coincidence? I THINK NOT!)
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Artist
I actually did too when I wrote this chapter XD
Reply
:iconwritergirl4life:
WriterGirl4Life Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 ahh the irony
Reply
:iconslendysdaughterforev:
slendysdaughterforev Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i love it i love it i love it ilove it! i love anything with Slenderman in it!
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Artist
I'm glad!
Reply
:icondeliuxas47:
deliuxas47 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
This is Incredible! You sir are a genius! I must read the other parts
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you!
Reply
:iconrabies10:
Rabies10 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
OMG.... I am sooooooooo excited!!!!!  You ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you!
Reply
:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gosh when I get hurt in a dream it's because something happened in real life. Like if I were falling I fell of the bed and I can feel myself land on the floor when I land on the ground in my dream, I wish I could feel no pain DX
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Artist
Well, personally the thought of feeling no pain horrifies me. I actually read a lot of creepy creepy pastas, so my first thought to that is how Rainbow Dash watched as Pinkie gutted her and felt nothing
Reply
:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
O-O
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Artist
Sorry :p
Reply
:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What are you apologizing for?
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Artist
I thought I freaked you out with that
Reply
:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol no.
Reply
:icon0lexdelapp:
0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm.... :iconthinkingplz:
I haven't read a Slenderman x Reader before, so I don't know what to say. I like it a lot though ^^
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you!
Reply
:icon0lexdelapp:
0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
np ^^
Reply
:iconamaterasu-daemon:
Amaterasu-daemon Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Most people don't feel pain in their dreams? I know I do but that might just be me.
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Artist
I don't, but when ever I get injured in a dream I manage to hurt myself in real life.
Reply
:icon0lexdelapp:
0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's scary O_o
Reply
:iconrabies10:
Rabies10 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Sometimes I feel pain in my dreams..... )X
Reply
:icon0lexdelapp:
0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That sucks D:
Reply
:iconrabies10:
Rabies10 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Yeah.....  But in some dreams, I feel so happy cuz I can do backflips and other hardcore stuff.   :)
Reply
:icon0lexdelapp:
0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay :3
I could never do backflips. Even in my dreams.
Reply
:iconrabies10:
Rabies10 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
I honestly don't know how I did it.  I just saw myself doing it.
Reply
:iconayooka-mizumaki:
Ayooka-Mizumaki Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013

This story has the most stellar dreams sequence ever.

 

Reply
:iconhalloweennightmar:
halloweennightmar Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student
I love it
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Artist
thank you so much
Reply
:iconfunhousefreak8:
funhousefreak8 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this story, so much. And it's just the first chapter! :D
Reply
:iconlolmclare:
lolmclare Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Artist
why thank you
Reply
:iconfunhousefreak8:
funhousefreak8 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :)
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:iconlolmclare: More from lolmclare


Featured in Collections

Slenderman by HikariCoycoon

Creepypasta by LilyXSasori15

slenderman by yuki474


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
July 3, 2013
Submitted with
Sta.sh Writer
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
9,850
Favourites
227 (who?)
Comments
50
×